Wednesday, April 1, 2009

Chapter 3-Solitary Tear












John was verymuch confident that, this new school & environment will definitely show him the right path which leads to success,even then his conscious was buzzing his mind that something is gonna be wrong, John had made his Mind that wat ever happens he must not loose his confidence.Since John did not have a Gud advisor in his life, he had to make his own decision in all walks of life that made him develop the attitude of avenging his childhood friends also his parents...but y parents???????.. John personal life was much worse , his parents Mr & mrs Wilson didnt run da family peacefully, Every new dawn has a new set of arguments between them, A hot indian sun that shone the white curtains of join to wake him up jus remained a dream all through his school life life.....John was now certain someone was talking to him. Slowly, he tore his eyes from the linoleum square he had been focusing on, and lifted his head cautiously to see who was speaking to him. His eyes looked directly into the face of a grinning, young man oh god that was none other than his maths teacher Mr.Carter, da funniest part is he was not actually talking to him but literally shouting @ him "John ,do u remember where are we,wat da hell r u thinking ?? Remember how much did u get in last first term exam?"
With a trembling legs and a jerk in tone and with a fake smile, said JOhn" yea yea yeah s s Mr.Carter, aa actually i i was thinkin about solvin this problem only sir,"
"Carter:oh is it so ??? Gud then, pls go near the Board and help me out to solve the problem Mr.Genius !!!!!!"
But in reality John don't even know wat da hell was goin around in maths class,da most tragic part is John don even know the chapter number that Carter s goin on with....John himself couldn't understand y is he like that.....Even God mignt have got confused ...John had Determination to do well,but he didnt put in any effort for that , more over his mind was filled wit pressures that he couldnt explain anything to anyone !!!!!
Proceeding to the board with a fear ,john recollected wat happened in the past !!!!!!! his determination failed this time too....if he coundnt solve the problem, all his class mates might laugh @ him !! but now its late to think about it!! Carter is known for his wrath ...he is short temper too...already John seen Carter beating his fellow mates for not answering properly..ha John moved along the class room stealthily,while carter was clearing few doubts for his friends ..John reached the board slowly rested the lower end of his palm to start his feather touch scribbling ,"crrriinngggggg....." with a monotonous tone the end of the hour for the day was announced..The tension and the fear in John's eyes was slowly departing meanwhile Mr.carter left teh room..ohhhfff John had challenging life everyday...days and months flew John was in school Volley Ball Team,one fine evenin Whiile John was playin for a Inter-school volleyball tournament ,accidentally he slipped off the Ground while his legs got struck in the net when he tried for a smash...Guess wat happened,John is very Skinny person that as soon as he landed on the Ground with his Right arm , he was punished with multiple fractures,which lead John to stay on a Bed rest for 3 months,its was Fortunate or unfortunate that John missed his Annual examination which lead to poor average and John was detained in class 9 ,This incident gave a new dimension to worsen the family senario, that Mr & Mrs Wilson..Fought like anything, Even though quarreling is not new ,this incident is a new theme to clash upon..Literally John seen them fighting ,hitting each other almost every dawn....
John's Grandpa and Mr.Wilson decided to ask for a second chance and ask his principal for a warning Promotion....But Mr.wilson was Humiliated by that principle..Feeling the Agony of his dad John endeavored to work hard and to make his parents feel proud.that too by the same principal who insulted his Dad. ..
From now on John's path of life Turned into a Garden of Roses.........


COMMING SOON:::--->>
  • Johns hesitation
  • John clears all subjects
  • Happy Days of John

3 comments:

  1. hey satya...
    the story is proceedin well.... just few tips if u dont mind...dont use short forms while writing, its decreses the essence of the story...... use more symbols for showin the emotions....like exclamatory marks...
    u r too good... keep bloggin..waiting for more....

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  2. Sathya.... I know da... but its proceeding in a classic way.. honestly.... :) m able 2 actually feel how it felt da...As brinda said, do express it fully , as the short forms act as horrible potholes in the road of this story da... or i can do that for u.. :)
    Awesome da..

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  3. yeah thanx for that man...wellafter Brandy said i m tryin to emphasis more on expressions,and feelings...so u can c a slight improvement in ma fourth episode.

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